Computers draft 2
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life.In twentieth century, people consider our world as a global village. Because we have a secret weapon which is computer.The computers for commonalty are always the right-hand helpers, and peopleuse them almost everyday all over the world. For example, we can through the Internet to realize real time news which happened in the other side of the world and watch a live baseball game, too. Besides, we can get some information which we don’t understand by surfing the Internet or even exchange our views with others.Personally, I have a dislike for computer. I consider that it is a convenient object to work but has nothing to attract me except it. It is boring to me all the time so I won’t crush on it like other people.Although I don’t like computers, there is no denying that computers are the most important thing in our nowadays life.

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Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. In the twentieth century, people consider our world as a global village because we have a secret weapon---computers. The computers for commonalty are always the right-hand helpers, and people use them almost everyday all over the world. For example, we can, through the Internet, realize real time news which happened in the other side of the world and watch a live baseball game, too. Besides, we can get some information which we don’t understand by surfing the Internet or even exchange our views with others.
Personally, I have a dislike for computer. I consider that it is a convenient object to work but has nothing to attract me except it?????. It is boring to me all the time so I won’t crush on it like other people. Although I don’t like computers, there is no denying that computers are the most important thing in our nowadays life.
* 第二段語意模糊,而且結論句與主題句互為矛盾,寫作大忌。
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