Computers Draf 1
Computers play important role in our everyday life. It can help students to hand in their homework in time. You will fall in love with the computer as long as you turn on it. However, you must be remind yourself that never sit in front of the computer for a long time. Almost every parents dislike their children depend too much on computers. Especially, they think that it waste of time to discuss in the BBS.
posted by 汶汶汶 @ 8:59 PM
4 Comments:
小姐，另一篇ㄋ，
(1) they think that it waste of time to discuss in the BBS.
→it waste time
(1)Computers play important role in our everyday life.
-->Computers play an important role in our everyday life.
(2)However, you must be [remind] yourself that never sit in front of the computer for a long time.
-->reminding
play "an" important
in our "daily" life
you must remind yourself
dislike their children depending too much on computers.
Computers play important role in our everyday life.
→play an important
too much on computers→much 後面加個time
it waste of time to discuss in the BBS.→wastes time
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