Computers
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life.
In twentieth century, people consider our world as a global village. It is because that we have a secret weapon which is computers.
The computers for commonalty always are the right-hand helper, and people
use them almost everyday all over the world.
For example, we can through the Internet to realize real time news which happened in the other side of the world and watch a live baseball game, too.
Besides, we can get some information which we don’t understand by surfing the Internet or even exchange our views with others.
Personally, I have a dislike for computer. I consider that it is a convenient object to work but has nothing to attract me except it. It is boring to me all the time so I won’t crush on it like others.
Although I don’t like computers but there is no denying that computers are the most important thing in our nowadays life.

6 Comments:
It is because that we have a secret weapon which is computers.可以直接寫Because we have a secret weapon which is computers.吧?
The computers for commonalty always are the right-hand helper, and people
是are always嗎?
恩恩恩恩恩~
1.It is because that we have a secret weapon which [is computers.]
computer不要s
2.第二段那邊的although跟but是不能連用的喔!就跟because...so一樣
3. I consider that it is a convenient object to work but has nothing to attract me except it. It is boring to me all the time so I won’t crush on it like others.
這兩句的邏輯怪怪的ㄝ
你一開始提到的是20世紀,但...
別忘了我們現在是21世紀了,記得要提一下~像now 或其他的東東...
which (are) computers
the computers
不需要再加the了
the right-hand helper(s)
* the computers 有"the"就沒有"s"
* always are ? 好像沒這樣的用法吧 !
* " although " 跟 " but " 不能連用 !
are always..
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