My School Life Draf 1
I lead a busy school life. Since I has been a senior high school student, I has been expected to enter an university. The test of entering an university is keen competition. Therefore, I am forced to study day and night. Every day, I am weighed down with the homework of school which is certainly a big burden for me.
That’s why I am busy in school and home. Besides, I am forced to give up the extracurricular activities. I hope that I can lead a colorful life.
posted by 汶汶汶 @ 7:52 PM
2 Comments:
(1)Since I [has been] a senior high school student, I [has] been expected to enter [an] university.
-->Since I was a senior high school student, I have been expected to enter a university.
(2)是a university
(3)整篇用過去式會比較好喔!
The test of entering an university is keen competition.
→the entrance exam of university也可以改這樣吧
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