A Strange Experience Draft 2

It was in a summer vacation, when I was 10 years old. I was in my hometown where were many trees and a clean river. One day, it was hot outside and I went to the river with my sister who is 3 years senior to me. After playing water for a long time, we took a rest under a big tree. Suddenly, a little boy who had bright golden hair appeared alone without saying anything. He seemed to be shy and hid himself behind a tree. We walked to him and tried to talk to him, but he just nodded and shook his head and say nothing. We felt much strange but still tried to communicate with him. Is he a mute? However, we still played game with him, and had a good time in the river all afternoon. He was a boy with a shining smile but never talked to us all day. After that, I went home and told to my father about the strange boy. To my surprise, my father told me that he was a foreigner and was in poor health. His parents took him here to take a rest. How could I play with a foreigner all day without saying a word? I thought it was because that the boy had a sweet smile and the smile is the best word in the world.

A Strange Experience Draft 1

It was in a summer vocation, when I was 10 years old. I was in my hometown where there were many trees and a clean river. One day, it was hot outside and I went to the river with my sister who is 3 years senior to me. After playing water for a long time, we took a rest under a big tree. Suddenly, a little boy who had bright golden hair appeared alone without saying anything. He seemed to be shy and hid himself behind a tree. We began to walk to him and tried to talk to him, but he just nodded and shook his head without saying a word. We felt much strange but still tried to communicate with him. Is he a mute? However, we still played game with him, and had a good time in the river all afternoon. But he never took to us all day. After that, I went home and told to my father about the strange boy. To my surprise, my father told me that he is a foreigner and is in poor health. His parents took him here to take a rest. How could I play with a foreigner all day without saying a word? I thought it was because that the boy had a sweet smile and the smile is the best word in the world.