Misunderstanding
I have taken the bus to school since I entered the senior high school. It was interesting in the beginning and I enjoyed yielding the seat to those who needs it. However, that day, everything had been changed.
One day, as usual, I got up early and took the bus to school. It was crowded the bus and I got a seat luckily. After that, in a bus stop an expectant woman got in but there was nobody gave up his seat to her. Therefore, I stood up and told her loudly to take my seat. Suddenly, everyone looked at me weirdly. At the moment, I finally understood that she was not a pregnant but only a heavy woman.
posted by ：V，瀞 ”婷* @ 5:44 AM
4 Comments:
was interesting in 這個是用在interested 的吧？介系詞好像要用for………吧！？
those who needs need應該不用加ｓ
After that, in a bus stop an ....時態一致
there was nobody gave up his seat to her.恩…be動詞和一般動詞變好朋友了！
哦～超好笑的……是真的嗎？真不愧是笨蛋ＸＤＤＤ
↑↑關於那句"It was interesting in..."
我想應該是沒錯,人當主詞時才用ed, and 介係詞的確是in喔~~
"It was crowded the bus and I got a seat luckily."
前面怪怪的,the bus前要不要加個on??
"After that, in a bus stop an expectant woman..."
in改成at
應該是got on ←上車
我覺得寫的很好，
簡單明瞭，
給包：
it was interesting in the beginning
→我的意思是，in the beginning是當時間
還有這是我的文章，是笨蛋幫我po的
蔡巧：
恩，on是少打的
笨蛋：
恩，還有，謝謝你幫我po
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