My Room draf 1
As you enter my room through the door, the big bed is in the left corner.
The room is a rectangle, and in the right corner is the desk. The bookcase
which I put all my books is next to the desk. The most special is that there is a small glass desk in the middle of the room with two cushions. I like to take a break there, and I like the place very much.
posted by 汶汶汶 @ 8:00 PM
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OK的啦～你房間東西不多…早知道在寫之前我就把房間的東西通通搬走＝．．＝
"The most special is that there is a small glass desk in the middle of the room with two cushions"
special後面可以加個thing
"The room is a rectangle"這句放在那邊感覺有點怪
還可以再加多一點東西
最後可以對整個房間做個結論
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我覺得The room is a rectangle可以放在the big bed is in the left corner的前面...
我覺得妳可以寫長一點，介紹多一點東西。用掰的也ok！
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