An Embarrassing Experience draft 1
Everyone has a experience which ever don’t want to experience again, and so do I. It was an embarrassing experience. I was walking to school in a typhoon day. It rained cats and dogs, and the wind was very strong. Walking on the wet road, I fell unluckily. All my clothes were wet and dirty, but I still had to go to school. Finally, when I got to school, everyone looked at me with a peculiar eyes. Afterward, my classmates told me that we will have a typhoon vocation today, so I have to walk home again. The first time I didn’t like a typhoon vocation. I thought that today was not my day.
posted by 汶汶汶 @ 7:50 PM
4 Comments:
Everyone has "an" experience
I was walking to school in a typhoon day.在特定的日子要用on
I thought that today was not my day.這句好怪啊～可以這用哦？
"...everyone looked at me with a peculiar eyes...."
加a 好像怪怪的
"Afterward, my classmates told me that we will have a typhoon vocation today,"
"The first time I didn’t like a typhoon vocation."
vocation(行業)?是vacation(假日)嗎?
The first time I didn’t like a typhoon vocation.
→The first time I didn’t like
typhoon vacation.
Finally, when I got to school, everyone looked at me with a peculiar eyes.-->...everyone looked at me with a peculiar eye. 或者用-->...everyone looked at me with peculiar eyes.
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